Friday, July 14, 2006

We Were Dreaming, Fridge Poetry, Fewer Adjectives

Hey...I did another fridge poetry but it didn't paste right so I am just typing it out.

We Were Dreaming

Waitresses in secret rows
familiar hometown moviehouses
lonely alleys in morning
gaunt caves and mountaintips
through roadside
Colorado memory
Stolen sunsets but
naked diner nights.

3 Comments:

At 10:57 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Oh, I like that!

 
At 11:10 AM, Blogger candy said...

Thanks Hal. Fun stuff huh. I like your poems also.

 
At 3:51 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Yeah, it is fun. I'm having a blast with it!

 

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